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Assembly code can be processed too. Requirements for it include a clear
separation of code and data, with data objects being placed into data
sections/segments. If indirect jumps are used for intra-function control
transfer (e.g. jump tables), the code patterns should be matching those
transfer (e.g., jump tables), the code patterns should be matching those
generated by Clang/GCC.
NOTE: BOLT is currently incompatible with the "-freorder-blocks-and-partition"
NOTE: BOLT is currently incompatible with the `-freorder-blocks-and-partition`
compiler option. Since GCC8 enables this option by default, you have to
explicitly disable it by adding "-fno-freorder-blocks-and-partition" flag if
explicitly disable it by adding `-fno-reorder-blocks-and-partition` flag if
you compiling with GCC8.
PIE and .so support has been added recently. Please report bugs if you
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## Installation
BOLT heavily uses LLVM libraries and by design it is built as one of LLVM
BOLT heavily uses LLVM libraries, and by design, it is built as one of LLVM
tools. The build process is not much different from a regular LLVM build.
The following instructions are assuming that you are running under Linux.
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This step is different for different kinds of executables. If you can invoke
your program to run on a representative input from a command line, then check
**For Applications** section below. If your programs typically runs as a
**For Applications** section below. If your program typically runs as a
server/service, then skip to **For Services** section.
The version of `perf` command used for the following steps has to support
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Once you get the service deployed and warmed-up, it is time to collect perf
data with LBR (branch information). The exact perf command to use will depend
on the service. E.g. to collect the data for all processes running on the
on the service. E.g., to collect the data for all processes running on the
server for the next 3 minutes use:
```
$ perf record -e cycles:u -j any,u -a -o perf.data -- sleep 180
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your profile. It's hard to tell upfront what would be a sweet spot for your
application. We recommend the profile to cover 1B instructions as reported
by BOLT `-dyno-stats` option. If you need to increase the number of samples
in the profile, you can either run the `sleep` command for longer, and/or use
in the profile, you can either run the `sleep` command for longer and use
`-F<N>` option with `perf` to increase sampling frequency.
Note that for profile collection we recommend using cycle events and not
`BR_INST_RETIRED.*`. Empirically we found it to produce better results.
If collection of a profile with branches is not available, e.g. when you run on
a VM or on a hardware that does not support it, then you can use only sample
If the collection of a profile with branches is not available, e.g., when you run on
a VM or on hardware that does not support it, then you can use only sample
events, such as cycles. In this case, the quality of the profile information
would not be as good, and performance gains with BOLT are expected to be lower.
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NOTE: you can skip this step and feed `perf.data` directly to BOLT using
experimental `-p perf.data` option.
For this step you will need `perf.data` file collected from the previous step and
For this step, you will need `perf.data` file collected from the previous step and
a copy of the binary that was running. The binary has to be either
unstripped, or should have a symbol table intact (i.e. running `strip -g` is
unstripped, or should have a symbol table intact (i.e., running `strip -g` is
okay).
Make sure `perf` is in your `PATH`, and execute `perf2bolt`:
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For a full list of options see `-help`/`-help-hidden` output.
The input binary for this step does not have to 100% match the binary used for
profile collection in **Step 1**. This could happen when you are doing an active
profile collection in **Step 1**. This could happen when you are doing active
development, and the source code constantly changes, yet you want to benefit
from profile-guided optimizations. However, since the binary is not exactly the
from profile-guided optimizations. However, since the binary is not precisely the
same, the profile information could become invalid or stale, and BOLT will
report the number of functions with stale profile. The higher the
report the number of functions with a stale profile. The higher the
number, the less performance improvement should be expected. Thus, it is
important to update `.fdata` for important releases.
crucial to update `.fdata` for release branches.
## Multiple Profiles